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假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：,1. 未及时回信的原因；,2. 你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）。,注意：1. 词数120左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,______________________________________,______________________________________,______________________________________,_____________________________________,______________________________________,【写作指导】,一、审题定调,本写作任务要求写一封电子邮件，属于应用文。人称以第一和第二人称为主，时态需根据语境而定。,二、谋篇布局,电子邮件的格式和普通信件一样，包括信头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。和本篇习作的要求一样，高考中邮件的信头通常不用写出，同学们只需要写出其它部分即可。其中，邮件的正文是重中之重。,本篇习作正文主要包含道歉和介绍假期计划两方面的内容，可分为以下三段：,第一段：表示歉意；,第二段：介绍假期计划；,第三段：表达愿望。,三、组织语言,1. 第一段：表示歉意并请求原谅。,2. 第二段：介绍活动安排。,3. 第三段：表达愿望。,【范文展示】,普通范文,Dear Tom,,①I'm sorry I didn't answer your email in time because ②I've been busy preparing for the final exams recently. Now, ③I'm writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming summer holidays.,First, ④I am going to do a part-time job. On the one hand, I can earn some money. On the other hand, I can get some social experience. Second, ⑤I'll go on a short trip to Hangzhou. There are some good places of interest.Third, ⑥I'll work as a volunteer. I have been looking forward to it for long.,By the way, how do you plan to spend your vacation? ⑦I'm looking forward to your reply.,Yours,,Li Hua,高级范文,Dear Tom,,①I'm sorry for not answering your email in time because ②I've been occupied with going over my lessons for the final exams. ③My plans for the coming summer vacation are as follows.,To start with, ④I intend to do a part-time job, through which not only can I earn money by myself, but also broaden my horizons. In addition, ⑤I'm thinking of taking a brief trip to Hangzhou, where I can visit some well-known places of interest. What's more, ⑥I'll work as a volunteer, which I have been looking forward to for long.,By the way, what's your plan? ⑦I'm looking forward to being told about your arrangements for the coming vacation.,Yours,,Li Hua,【实战演练】,假定你是李华，你的美国笔友海伦给你发电子邮件，询问你最近的一次最有趣的旅游经历。请你给她回一封电子邮件。,注意百思特网：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。,Dear Hele百思特网n,,I'd like to tell you something about one of my most pleasant trips.,____________________________________,_______________________________________,______________________________________,_______________________________________,_______________________________________,Yours,,Li Hua,参考答案,Dear Helen,,I'd like to tell you something about one of my most pleasant trips.,My family and I went to Dajiao Gulf for a holiday last weekend, which is twenty kilometers away from my home. Having packed our camera, some snacks, clothes and some other things, we set off at 7 on Saturday morning by car. The most exciting thing was swimming in the sea. We enjoyed the big waves. They always carried us to the beach. The beaches were fantastic. The sunrise and sunset百思特网 were simply wonderful. What's more, the sea food there was very delicious.,The trip was an unforgettable experience. I'd like to show you around there if you come to China.,Yours,,Li Hua,
